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Comic Study Day 3. Tank Girl and "Camera" Placement. I came across this page, and I noticed something off. Haha. image Let me explain. I don't know if this is taught or focused on in comics, but in Film/Animation we are taught the 180 degree rule. Which is where the camera should not cross the 180 degree line of the stage. "The rule states that the camera should be kept on one side of an imaginary axis between two characters, so that the first character is always frame right of the second character. Moving the camera over the axis is called jumping the line or crossing the line; breaking the 180-degree rule by shooting on all sides is known as shooting in the round." This helps keep things visually clear. Of course it is broken intentionally on occasion to convey to the viewer something is wrong, a jarring and confusing moment. It is usually intentionally done. image Tank Girl breaks that in panel 3 where ponytail girl flings milk at Tank Girl. Which is confusing because Tank Girl is established on screen Left, the Kangaroo is in the Middle, and ponytail is screen Right. I redrew it with the "proper" placement. image As I drew I realized why Ashley Wood did it that way, it was because of the flow of the dialogue/speech bubbles. I imagine he did it that way so your eye would flow smoothly from one panel to the next. So that is interesting how the flow of speech can sometimes disrupt the flow of the images. The last panel with the cow is fine because he is establishing this is a new location, so the rules/camera placement can be different, I think the placement change also helps establish that time passed and they are somewhere different because there is literally no background. An article explaining more about the 180 degree rule with examples if you are curious:
Comic Study Day 2 the importance of half tones. There is a lot going on in this page. I like how Ashley Wood used half tones to separate important things and add depth to the comic. As you can see my line drawings are hard to follow. I think the first two panels are a bit too crammed and using exposition in dialogue is not great. But I think there was no easy way around that. #comic #study #comicstr #artstr
I started drafting out a #comic idea I've had for awhile. The script is done. I just need to draw it. But I've never done a comic book before, so I decided to study some comics that are visually appealing to me. I thought I would share my findings! If that's interesting to you all. My first study is a page from Tank Girl illustrated by Ashley Wood. I really dig Ashley's rough style. But I gotta say I feel like the writer, Alan C Martin, is wayyy too wordy. My study: image I like the flow of the panels and how visually straightforward yet interesting everything is. It really leads the eye. The original page: https://nostpic.com/media/4d2d857513d473862b9da95e5117b746c6a3155a8cfb1d4afa195e707de556a4/a4e2b0bd7b144537de0049201d6e9285024046fce99329b88e6fdc0a514a3932.webpIs See what I mean by too wordy? This is like one of the least wordy pages. I think that's what appeals to me in manga. They show and don't tell. I am referencing another manga "Goodnight Punpun" and one of its Wordiest paged only has 8 sentences! image Where as Tank Girl has 13+ sentences each page. That's not showing that is telling. In visual media that's usually a bad sign. Now if this were a novel it would be a different story entirely. This was a good comparison to me, I will keep my eye out for things that are too wordy. It means I'm not conveying an idea well. #study #tankgirl #manga #artstr #comicstr
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