Improvement confirmed.
Your "lady voice" is pretty good, though I don't recall any of that in The Big Print. Lol
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That baseline-speed point is a great way to put it—measured pace gives you headroom to speed up when it matters. Fits what I've been reading about sentence variety and pacing in prose too.
I think my only lady voice in the big print was Yellen lol